雅思写作 9 分范文

animal testing( 动物实验)


Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


It is true that medicines and other products are routinely tested on animals before they are cleared for human use. While I tend towards the viewpoint that animal testing is morally wrong, I would have to support a limited amount of animal experimentation for the development of medicines.

On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal experimentation. To use a common example of this practice, laboratory mice may be given an illness so that the effectiveness of a new drug can be measured. Opponents of such research argue that humans have no right to subject animals to this kind of trauma, and that the lives of all creatures should be respected. They believe that the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused, and that scientists should use alternative methods of research.

On the other hand, reliable alternatives to animal experimentation may not always be available. Supporters of the use of animals in medical research believe that a certain amount of suffering on the part ofmice or rats can be justified if human lives are saved. They argue that opponents of such research might feel differently if a member of their own families needed a medical treatment that had been developed through the use of animal experimentation. Personally, I agree with the banning of animal testing for non-medical products, but I feel that it may be a necessary evil where new drugs and medical procedures are concerned.

In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on animals for vital medical research until equally effective alternatives have been developed.


你和雅思的故事 - Go Hard or Go Home

发表于 2019-07-17


1 、学习资料: 剑桥雅思真题 8-10 个,动手操作。不.(说实话,剑桥 10 后的范文已经超过了我的理解能力。不如看一下我父亲的范文)

2,所上的课: 老谷精品课、预测课、精品课 (精品课让我系统的学习了雅思作文怎么写, 包括有哪些类型的主题,应该回答什么样的类型,如何构建整个平安官网结构,以及如何拓展思路; 预测班级主要是实践各种问题,积累素材; 精批班,顾名思义就是接受准确的批评, 简称 “精批”)

在去上老课之前,我看了一下真题,考了 6 分 (我不是英语专业的,不能羞辱英语专业)。上了老顾的课后,第一个考试是 7.5,然后我就撞到了 9,我也被逼了。


逻辑: 我认为逻辑思维能力 (包括题目的演绎) 是决定雅思作文成绩的关键。老顾经常在微博上推送征文问题和想法。我每次都是先把问题看了一遍,然后想想自己的看法 (包括可以举什么例子),再把老顾的意见进行对比,看其中的区别在哪里。你想错了,想错了吗?你有什么更好的观点?不要低估这个过程。即使你没有时间练习写整篇平安官网,这个锻炼逻辑思维的过程,也会让你在考场上短时间内想到意见, 为您节省更多的写作时间。

内容: 雅思作文要有内容,不能写空话。这是我从顾老师那里学到的最本质的东西,在保证语法正确,逻辑合理的情况下,内容是帮助平安彩票合法平台提高分数的东西。老顾经常强调讲解、举例、具体说明的拓展方法。每个人在练习作文时都应该强迫自己使用它们。然后你要比较一下你写的和你写的之间的差距,不管你是轮流开车,不管你是真的举例子,还是只是说空话。

语法: 老顾在作文中经常强调 6 的前提是语法要正确。是的,而且拿到高分语法更重要,因为你要保证语法不给你扣分,你只对得起其他分数。语法方面的经验我不能给太多,因为我自己并没有真正去分析各种句子成分,但是我会去模仿。简单地说,我抄了一下,考官范文和老顾是怎么写句子的。老顾精品班几乎每天都推送翻译练习。当我空了的时候我会看着他们。有时,老顾会立刻找到这条信息。但是这些是积累,是你从 6 分到 7 分甚至更高的基础。我曾经在 7 点之后写过 somebody is easy todosomething 这个错误的句子。所以你必须在纸上实现很多东西,要写,你看不到你的错误。还有,我还不到 7 岁的时候,就被一位好朋友训了一顿。她问我: 顾继备的 10 个句型,你现在能背诵多少个?可能是从那一刻开始,我脚踏实地,然后我在背 10 个句型的时候,证明了我是 7 号的?

词汇和表达: 以外国人的身份写英语。如果你能保证上述三个项目都是正确的,那么词汇是给你 7 个的关键。我想我可以学到我手中的好词,课堂上给大家的作文里的词,足够你参加 7 场以上的考试了。老顾经常推送 Simon 的范文,同时,结合自己的文字对比,可能很多同学对老顾的做法没有重视, 其实这是教你在写作的时候,如何灵活的替换不同的词汇和表达方式。不幸的是,在这一点上没有捷径。除非你记忆力好,天赋高,否则只能靠积累。想考 7 分以上的同学,要特别注意这一点。另外,表达也很关键。说白了就是一句话。外国人如何用地道的术语表达自己,主谓宾是什么,甚至用什么介词和副词,当平安彩票合法平台表达一件事的时候, 平安彩票合法平台习惯使用长形容词和名词,外国人有时喜欢使用动词和副词。这些真的需要自己去学习和积累。因此,看老顾和考官的作文,除了学习词汇外,还要学会表达,这一点非常重要。


发表于 2019-07-17


Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it positive or negative development?

Advertising is gaining more popularity in the marketing of products or services. While advertisements are considered to be advantageous, they can have numerous negative influences .

It is unquestionable that there are several benefits of advertising. By dint of the large-scale expansion of advertising in almost every kind of mass media and nearly all hoardings, this sector is likely to generate a diversity of employment opportunities. In other words, it provides occupations for artists, painters or copywriters in designing and preparing logos, contents or ideas for advertisements. Another advantage is that advertising may enable the massages involved in products and services to reach potential customers, followed by an increase in sales for businesses. Additionally, only thanks to advertisements, can customers be kept informed about newly-launched products. Therefore, they have more choices to make about their beloved products, contributing to the enhancement of their comforts and standard of living.

However, advertising could cause several disadvantages for customers . No sooner might companies or business exaggerate or even distort the facts related to their products for commercial purposes than the customers can experience feelings of confusion about these items, making them have troubles in selecting the products to their taste. Furthermore, the facts show that the more advertising expenses increase, the higher the product price is. The reason can be that the high cost of advertisements is covered by the selling price of advertised items. As a result, the advertised products can cost more than they should. Finally, when customers cannot resist the temptation of products which are advertised beyond customers 'expectations, there is every likelihood of them purchasing products which may be unnecessary. This trend could be seen as a waste of money.

In conclusion, based on the above mentioned explanations, individuals may gain both considerable benefits and drawbacks through the growing prevalence of advertisements.


发表于 2019-07-17
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